Changes To Double Page Spread

After reviewing my pages, I decided that I need to make sudden changes.

I moved the quote at the top of the page, added the word 'motherf***er' (sic) and lowered the word 'Genius' as my double page spread exposed too much space. I decided to add this particular explicit word because outspoken and arrogant rock artists isn't unheard of. It makes things more real and honest and true to this specific genre.

This is what the top left of my double page spread looked like before I made changes...

...And this is what the top left then looked like after I added the word.

I also changed my text, I eradicated the third column as it wasn't level with the other two. I also added another photo of my main artist to take up more empty space.

This was my initial double page spread, I wasn't really proud of it to be brutally honest. It was far too basic.

And this is my page after I made the changes, there is still a bit of space but there is more going on now. I've added another picture and some text and I am relatively proud of what I produced.